Pitch Deck feedback needed!

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A game developer is seeking feedback on their pitch deck for the game "OBVERSE," aimed at attracting publishers, after receiving rejections without explanation. The developer shares a Google Docs link to the pitch deck and specifically requests input from those with publishing industry experience or similar expertise. One concrete detail is that the game can be previewed on Steam.

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Seeking feedback on a pitch deck for game publishing

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<!-- SC_OFF --><div class="md"><p>Hello! I'm in the process of pitching my game <a href="https://store.steampowered.com/app/4028770/OBVERSE">OBVERSE</a> to publishers, and while I've already sent a few pitches and got some useful feedback, a lot of them simply reject without providing any reasons. So I'd like to have some extra feedback before reaching out to more publishers.</p> <p>Here's the link to the deck, any feedback is appreciated, specially if you work with/for publishers or have any relevant experience: <a href="https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1jrTnhMF6P7uvuurNlQHYk0Uss66-2jWmmxOfJmBZ8CE/edit?usp=sharing">https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1jrTnhMF6P7uvuurNlQHYk0Uss66-2jWmmxOfJmBZ8CE/edit?usp=sharing</a></p> </div><!-- SC_ON --> &#32; submitted by &#32; <a href="https://www.reddit.com/user/eagle_bearer"> /u/eagle_bearer </a> <br /> <span><a href="https://www.reddit.com/r/gamedev/comments/1uog0f3/pitch_deck_feedback_needed/">[link]</a></span> &#32; <span><a href="https://www.reddit.com/r/gamedev/comments/1uog0f3/pitch_deck_feedback_needed/">[comments]</a></span>