Destroy my pitch!

Summary · qwen2.5:32b

A game developer seeks critical feedback on their pitch deck aimed at publishers for their game, OBVERSE. The pitch is shared openly to enhance its effectiveness before formal presentations. The game’s Steam page and a direct link to the editable Google presentation are provided for comprehensive review.

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<!-- SC_OFF --><div class="md"><p>Hey! I'm in the process of pitching my game to publishers but I'd like to have some feedback on my pitch deck before reaching out more.</p> <p>Feel free to ask me anything and provide any feedback you might think of.</p> <p>Pitch Deck: <a href="https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1jrTnhMF6P7uvuurNlQHYk0Uss66-2jWmmxOfJmBZ8CE/edit?usp=sharing">https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1jrTnhMF6P7uvuurNlQHYk0Uss66-2jWmmxOfJmBZ8CE/edit?usp=sharing</a></p> <p>Steam Page: <a href="https://store.steampowered.com/app/4028770/OBVERSE">https://store.steampowered.com/app/4028770/OBVERSE</a></p> </div><!-- SC_ON --> &#32; submitted by &#32; <a href="https://www.reddit.com/user/eagle_bearer"> /u/eagle_bearer </a> <br /> <span><a href="https://www.reddit.com/r/gamedev/comments/1up3jep/destroy_my_pitch/">[link]</a></span> &#32; <span><a href="https://www.reddit.com/r/gamedev/comments/1up3jep/destroy_my_pitch/">[comments]</a></span>